A Castle Adventure
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It was
a sunny day. Me, my friend and family were going to the beach until the
tyre had gone flat. My dad got out to see what had happened..! I got out
of the car, so did my friend. My mum got out, she told me and Faye to go
and get a pump. She gave me the money. Mellessa the oldest sister had to
come with us. Me, Faye and Mellessa walked to find a shop with pumps in
whilst mum, dad, my sisters and brother walked to the beach.
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Me,
Faye and Mellessa walked up to a castle. We knocked on the door, the door
had opened, no one answered it. The door had opened on its own, it was
scary, it was like there was a ghost in the castle. Faye whispered “let’s
explore”, so we went to explore the spooky castle. The door slowly had
shut. We crept up stairs and the three witches came past. We hid behind a
stack of boxes so they couldn’t see us. I was going to sneeze but then
Mellessa grabbed hold of my nose.
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The
three witches saw us so we quickly rushed down stairs and hid in the
cloakroom and didn’t say a word at all. Mellessa whispered, “are they still
looking for us?”, “no” I loudly moaned to Mellessa. We all stepped out of
the cloakroom slowly but then a ghost came past and suddenly he saw us so we
got back in the cloakroom. The ghost came through the door and we ran
somewhere safe from the ghost and witches.
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In the back
garden there was a cemetery where all the dead people were buried. We went
out to the back garden and walked around, but suddenly zombies came out from
the ground. The zombies walked up to me, Faye and Mellessa. We could not
run anywhere from the zombies to we pushed the zombies down and ran. We
stepped over the buried people but Faye cried out “help” so me and Mellessa
went back for her. We kicked the zombies but a zombie grabbed hold of
Mellessa. It was up to me to save Mellessa and Faye but suddenly there was
a rustle in the tree.
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It was a
boy. I asked his name. He said frightened “James”. He asked me what I was
doing in this haunted castle. I told him that I came to explore with my
sister and my friend Faye. He told me “you have to get out of this castle
now”. I shouted “no, I’m looking for Mellessa and Faye.” I shouted that I
wasn’t going to give up until I had found them. He shouted fine, then get
out of here and he came with me in case I had got into trouble. I whispered
“Do you live in this castle?” and he said “yes”. He told me that his
parents had a car crash and they were dead. I felt sorry for James because
he had no one to look after him. We kept on walking. In the middle window
we saw the witches and my sister and Faye.
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We ran to
the haunted castle and ran up stairs and in front of us was the middle
room. I had my mobile with me. I whispered to James that those witches
were in the paper and were wanted so I rang the police and told them to come
quick. I told them where we were. I told James to go down to the police
and then the police knocked down the door and they were arrested for ever
until they were good witches. There was £600 to share between me, Faye and
Mellessa. I asked what was going to happen to James. The police said he’ll
go to stay with an auntie or uncle. I said to James “goodbye, come and see
us again some day” and he said goodbye too.
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